All about Me What upJ, my name is Jenessa and I’m going to tell you about the goals in life and about my life! I’m in fifth grade and I go to Saticoy School! My favorite color is a type of blue called cerulean I like it because it seems very calming to me. In my awesome family I have one mom named Jocelyn, a dad named Jason, a mean sister named Jasmine, a little brother named Joshua and me Jenessa so were a j family. My friends are Jessica, Kiara, Vicky, Olivia, Jazmin and Angelina. My friends’ care about me and I also care about them. I have a lot more friends but my finger will probably be hurting after I finish the period on that sentence.
The positions I play in softball are pitcher, 1st base, 3rd base, 2nd base and short stop. The positions I play in basketball are guard and front. The teams I played on in the past and now the present the first team was the blue barracudas, the next year I played on the blue dolphins, after I played on the Ventura all stars twice, then the fall ball American eagles, team elite and then also I played for madness, the ultimate softball chicks, and in summer I played in all stars like I mentioned before and now I’m on Oxnard sting travel ball team.
My personal goals are to try to be the best I can be in sports. Lastly, I need to stop being mean to my family and be nicer. I see myself as a doctor or a softball player and how I become a doctor is by being good in school and to get my medical degree.
My academic goals are to become a doctor but I have to work really hard in school and never give up. If you try your best in school you can get ahead in life but my parents actually said it so, yaaah. Anyways, my last goal is to be awesome to be teachable. Now I am going to talk about great things in school! Two years ago my teacher Mrs. Strickland commented me on my writing in third grade. The teachers I have had before are Mrs. Rick for 1st grade, Mrs. Palmisano for 2nd grade, for 3rd grade I had Mrs. Strickland but she wasn’t that strict actually, in 4th grade I had Ms. Tygell who is awesome and now I have Mr. Wulff and Mrs. Gieb the awesomest teachers in the world! My birthday is in December 28, 2000 World was going to end in the year that I was born in but luckily, it didn’t happen. So that’s my story bye bye!! J - Jenessa Adelynne Reader Feedback Hi Jenessa, I love how you wrote the phonetic spelling of your last name so people will say it correctly! Could you please separate your essay into paragraph and tell me how you are going to achieve your goals? I love cerulean blue as well. Tell me more about your hobbies, where you play, your position, the names of your teams. Keep on going, I want to read more about you! --Mrs. Geib P.S. Once you are finished with your portrait, I will scan it in and post it for you.
All about Me
What upJ, my name is Jenessa and I’m going to tell you about the goals in life and about my life! I’m in fifth grade and I go to Saticoy School! My favorite color is a type of blue called cerulean I like it because it seems very calming to me. In my awesome family I have one mom named Jocelyn, a dad named Jason, a mean sister named Jasmine, a little brother named Joshua and me Jenessa so were a j family.
My friends are Jessica, Kiara, Vicky, Olivia, Jazmin and Angelina. My friends’ care about me and I also care about them. I have a lot more friends but my finger will probably be hurting after I finish the period on that sentence.
The positions I play in softball are pitcher, 1st base, 3rd base, 2nd base and short stop. The positions I play in basketball are guard and front. The teams I played on in the past and now the present the first team was the blue barracudas, the next year I played on the blue dolphins, after I played on the Ventura all stars twice, then the fall ball American eagles, team elite and then also I played for madness, the ultimate softball chicks, and in summer I played in all stars like I mentioned before and now I’m on Oxnard sting travel ball team.
My personal goals are to try to be the best I can be in sports. Lastly, I need to stop being mean to my family and be nicer. I see myself as a doctor or a softball player and how I become a doctor is by being good in school and to get my medical degree.
My academic goals are to become a doctor but I have to work really hard in school and never give up. If you try your best in school you can get ahead in life but my parents actually said it so, yaaah. Anyways, my last goal is to be awesome to be teachable.
Now I am going to talk about great things in school! Two years ago my teacher Mrs. Strickland commented me on my writing in third grade. The teachers I have had before are Mrs. Rick for 1st grade, Mrs. Palmisano for 2nd grade, for 3rd grade I had Mrs. Strickland but she wasn’t that strict actually, in 4th grade I had Ms. Tygell who is awesome and now I have Mr. Wulff and Mrs. Gieb the awesomest teachers in the world! My birthday is in December 28, 2000 World was going to end in the year that I was born in but luckily, it didn’t happen.
So that’s my story bye bye!! J - Jenessa Adelynne
Reader Feedback
Hi Jenessa, I love how you wrote the phonetic spelling of your last name so people will say it correctly! Could you please separate your essay into paragraph and tell me how you are going to achieve your goals? I love cerulean blue as well. Tell me more about your hobbies, where you play, your position, the names of your teams. Keep on going, I want to read more about you! --Mrs. Geib
P.S. Once you are finished with your portrait, I will scan it in and post it for you.